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Catch me.
Hold me.
Keep me safe.
'Cause I'm callin'
And I'm fallin'
And the ground is inches from my face.

Hold me.
Love me.
Keep me sane.
'Cause I'm cryin'
And I'm dyin'
And my heart's about to break.

Love me.
Know me.
Keep me here.
'Cause I'm sinkin'
And I'm thinkin'
That I'd better disappear.

Know me.
See me.
Keep me whole.
'Cause I'm slippin'
And I'm trippin'
And I don't know what to do.

So can you help me?
Can you see?
Can you hear me?
Help me see.

Catch me.
Hold Me.
Keep me safe.
'Cause I'm callin'
And I'm fallin'
And I'm about to hit rock bottom.
:iconsnsarenotmyfriends:

Author's Comments

Doesn't have a melody but it seemed like a song. First piece of '09!

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:iconlikkledibbun:
It totally reminds me of a song.

I was reading the "verb me verb me" phrases in the beginning of each stanza, and I was totally thinking Phantom of the Opera. XD

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"Life isn't fair. It's just fairer than death, that's all."
:iconsapphire159:
It's like it has verses and a bridge but no chorus... Or that's what it seemed like to me when I hummed a tune in my head.

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Deny me and be doomed. :pride:
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:iconsnsarenotmyfriends:
Lol, totally not what I had in mind, but completely understandable. XD

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"Maybe the darkness has gotten to me, too."
:iconsnsarenotmyfriends:
Yeah, I know what you mean. =/

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"Maybe the darkness has gotten to me, too."

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