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Tears drip slowly
From my arm
And join the
Puddle of blood
From my eyes.

Feelings pour
From my head
And mix with the
Jumble of thoughts
From my heart.

When down is up
And up is gone
And none of it
Makes any sense
And never did.

When left is right
And right is wrong
And all of it
Confuses me
And always will.

I don't know what to do.
©2008-2009 ~snsarenotmyfriends
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Author's Comments

98. Puzzle

I'm a bit of a puzzle inside my head. I came up with the first part and just had to write something.

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i really like the first four lines.
those are hekka deep. they really catch you into the poem.

i like that the first two stanzas are more physical, and the second two are more emotional/mental.
i really like it.
i'm sorry you're confused, though.
*hugs*

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rcm
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Thanks for the fav. Yeah, the first stanza is my favorite.

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"Maybe the darkness has gotten to me, too."

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